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hey hey hey are we back in hopefully so let me know in the chat below if you guys can see and hear me just fine the wolf murphy has always been in place and as soon as i went live my internet connection dropped so let me know in the comments below if you guys can hear me just fine so we can begin this live session great so this life will be breaking down in a couple of different sections in the beginning i would like to describe how it would be how the life would go on later down the line everyone will have between three to five minutes for a page audit meaning i will tune in the timer which you guys can see right now and inside with the help of this timer i will be visiting pages and giving you feedback at least for three minutes and the maximum would be five minutes in this way every single person in the chat right now would have the ability to get their page audited and hopefully throw some value from it so without further ado let's start with the page review i will start with the first one which dropped their handle which was the brian i hope i pronounced your name correctly let me just share the camera right here let's begin the timer and let's start so we will start by going in the page and covering every single element of the page itself itself we will cover the handle we will cover for the instagram highlights that you're using your bio headline everything so starting off with your profile picture i quite like it i believe it is nice you are utilizing some bright colors in your t-shirt which makes it pop off one thing that i would probably utilize is adding some kind of solid background behind you or at least something which can be associated with your feet later on for example i'm using the red color that would just give your profile picture that extra oomph and enable you to stand out in the comment section in the small sizes of instagram so this is the first thing secondly in terms of your handle you have gone the safe route you have utilized your name totally fine now in terms of your headline which currently says the brienne sales coach most of the people who are going to be visiting your page they have already seen your handle meaning that they already know your name so there is no need to repeat your name inside of the headline that's why i recommend you leaving the headline only for keywords related to what you're offering in this case sales coaching i definitely recommend you utilizing the headline as much as possible for keywords because this will enable you to later on be found in the search results because the headline and the handle are searchable on instagram so drop the first part of the headline which covers your handle once again and leave your headline only for keywords related to your industry the first line of your bio which is one of the most important ones i will teach you to increase sales in your business fine i would like some extra specifics meaning if you can go more in depth and ease down on what kind of businesses you can help that can help you tremendously learning and teaching techniques for sales now this first part of the second line confuses me a bit learning and teaching techniques if you wanted to say that you're documenting into your journey you don't have a lot of experience i believe that there are way better ways to do that because right now it seems like you are just repeating what you're learning and i cannot trust you so for that reason i do recommend you changing that first part of the second line and then your call to action for more sales techniques is okay i would add more clarity on what will happen after i click your link in bio because right now there is no way for me to know if you're bringing me to a sales page if you're bringing me to a freebie so i would give more clarity on what exactly you're offering in that link in bio and what would happen if i click it now later on the highlights youtube viral reverse moments opportunity these are fine but because you're a new profile i do recommend you adding some kind of social proof so in your case it might be testimonials which you have first received it might be some uh case studies which you have done for your clients so i do believe that you can add something as a social proof in your highlights we have one minute left so let's dive straight in your content i see that you're utilizing rios good for you that you're also utilizing carousels great so you are using the latest content formats having said that one thing that stands out and i'm sure the people in the chat can see as well is that you're not utilizing a consistent visual identity meaning your second post how to become great salesperson it's a red background with yellow typography then you have blue background with yellow typography then you have some kind of elements in this real cover and boot typography so i heavily recommend you finding the visual identity that works for you so we have 30 seconds left i hope that this has been super helpful for you leave your thoughts in the chat if you have anything you'd like me to cover as well or just simply dm you on instagram so i hope that you guys love this preview of the audios that we are going to be doing in this youtube live i would be super grateful if you can smash the like button because this will help us reach more people and get more people in and enjoying the value i will jump straight into the next person who left a comment after the brian which was alexander so i like octopus let's reset the timer and let's begin give me one second i'm still on new when it comes down to streaming so the next person who we are going to be reviewing is alec octopus so alec same thing with you your handle which says alec and then octopus is okay i believe that octopus is a bit brief and lacks clarity doesn't have any keyword power in your specific industry but i guess that it plays a big role in your branding but i definitely think if your handle is the best way a place to add this branding i for example use brave elements a lot in my social media presence but i don't use it in my handle because the handle should be reserved for keywords in your case i would probably do sales alec or something of that kind in order to get the keyword in my handle and that way i wouldn't waste any space because the handle is the most searchable element of your instagram profile having said that moving on to the headline you have these two keywords sales and closing good job for you i believe that if you play a little bit around with your handle bring in some of the keywords there then you can add some branding in the headline fine in terms of your profile picture i like that you have the logo behind you but i'm not sure how often you use this logo in your content so is this something which you're trying to create a brand around or is this something which you just used to have because i remember you didn't have a profile picture with you in the beginning so i would definitely retake this profile picture have you more in a focus such as the profile picture that the brianne had and remove the wall in the background just use your brand cover switch are dark blue and tight brown which i quite like in terms of the bio now here is the juicy part the first line which is the most important line of your bio if someone isn't caught in the first line of your bio there is no reason for them to read the rest is how weak so i definitely think that starting your first line with something which is so much on yourself such as saying founder or business owner of x y and z is a wasted opportunity so in this case i would definitely play around with the first line of the bio and make sure it is focused on the user meaning how are you helping people obviously in the headline you're saying sales and closing but how exactly give more clarity the first line of your bio is super important it has to make people want to learn the rest then the second line social proof costs more than 850 years okay your brand new account you can use this social proof let's jump to the fourth line right now which is get daily live coaching for seven dollars this again is a really nice call to action debrayan you can take a look at how he is using it because he's super clear on what people are going to be receiving so in this case your call to action your fourth line is great the problem which i have is that currently in your bio in the four lines you have you have two call to actions meaning the first one is follow me and learn how to get clients and then the second one is get the live coaching there are many studies out there that show that when you add more than one call to action the effectiveness of both call to actions or three call to actions significantly drop so in this case i would probably just leave the call to action which is about your monetization and scrap the rest in terms of your highlights the first thing that stands out to me is that the first highlight and the fourth highlight have one very specific style they are really line intensive whilst the second and third they are more of a vector character so these two have completely different vibes to them so i definitely recommend you either making the first and fourth more vectorized as well or making the second and the third more linear as well moving on to the content and we have 30 seconds left i quite like what you're trying to do you're inserting yourself inside of your content which is a great way to build a brand you also seem to be playing around with your visual identity whilst keeping some templates which i'm sure help you a lot in terms of the production time having said that this might turn a little boring for people especially when they're scrolling in their feed because there is no way for me to know unless i read your copy if this post right here and this post right here are the same or are they new ones that's why when people are quickly scrolling and they see the power of a fun yet premium service and then they see top five sales power action words they actually might be thinking that this is the same post i'm not engaged with the second one that's why i recommend you playing around with changing your visual identity while keeping some of the fundamentals in place so this has been your review alex i hope that you draw some value from it by the way i see that people are spamming in the chat to review their profiles this is completely normal rest assured though i will have time to review most of your profiles so you don't have to spam the the way i'm looking at this audience is whoever has left the comments first will get their page reviewed first so even if you're spamming 10 000 times you're still behind in the sections so no no need to spam i will get to you later on alec i would appreciate if you leave a comment saying if this has been helpful that way i will know how to proceed with the further reviews the next person we have is the digi wizard i'm really fond of this name great job on the branding let's reset our timer and let's dive straight into it okay the gg wizard let's check your profile right now okay hello great great to see you now the first thing that i i'm not sync with every single account which we have reviewed this for is the handle up until now we don't really have any weak handles i have liked every single one of them the thing that stands out to me right now is an inconsistency though the handle the gigi wizard you have gigi which is a keyword that's fine then you have some branded elements that's fine as well having said that i don't see you utilizing this branded element the wizard part in your bio nor your content so for for me this uh this branded element right here is worthless in comparison to what alec did the person who reviewed uh before he had octopus in his handle which was a branded element but then he utilized this octopus every everywhere in his content so i definitely recommend you doing something else if you want to keep your handle this way then try to find ways to utilize magic wizardry in your uh content and in your bio moving along the headline the whole mark thing i believe that marketing is a really good keyword if you have a lot of traffic coming to your profile meaning in your case because you're still a relatively small profile you don't have a lot of profile visits coming in meaning you don't really have a lot of authority in the eyes of instagram that's why i would use more specific and more nice down keywords such as digital marketing or just the marketing for um in india so i would knees down the keywords that i'm utilizing moving onwards to your pro picture i quite like it you have utilized white course you are at the center and you are clearly visible so i don't have any feedback based on your profile picture in terms of the highlights i believe that there is definitely room for improvement i see that you are utilizing this first highlight as a social proof highlight having said that i definitely think that you can tell more about your story more about who you are and how you can help others in the section right here highlights are extremely important because they enable you guys to keep people on your profile for longer periods of time and the more time per a person spends on your profile the better it is in terms of conversion rate meaning are you going to be able to turn a profile visit into a follower so in this case i would definitely add further highlights in terms of your bio let's start from the bottom the call to action gme for questions and inquiries this again is really really basic call to action which isn't uh there's anything there isn't anything wrong with it but if we take a look at what alec octopus did i would definitely make sure that this call to action has more specifics specific meaning how can you help people so gme for any questions regarding digital marketing can be your call to action and that would be forced stronger call to action another thing that you can do is definitely play around with the lines which are above and make sure you prime your audience but i still think that the call to actions should be more specific than this another thing is that right now your link in bio is probably going to take me to linkedin first instagram doesn't really like you taking people outside of the platform yet i want to a different social media platform so i would probably remove this linkedin link because right now what it seems to me is jme for any questions i click the link in bio i go to linkedin and i start jamming you there whilst i believe you'd like people to gm you on instagram that remo the link uh linkedin link you have right here and on call to action without any link this is actually something that i did for my first 50 000 followers on instagram so you can definitely utilize this as well now moving forwards to the second and third line i believe that you're trying to be too many things to too many people you're covering design for brands you're covering donation on social media you're also just a marketing consultant so i would definitely focus on fewer things but make them higher quality so in this case you might focus specifically on social media you might focus specifically on branded design you might specifically focus on consulting in the digital marketing space but but i would tighten down your your presence in your bio so i hope that this has been helpful rahu leave your comment in the chat so i can know how i can improve further on and we are going to be continuing with these page audits for 40 more minutes so there is plenty of time to review your profile giving me a moment to sip from my coffee branded element right here as well lion roaring bravery so this is the level of branding that you guys can be doing moving forwards live creator armin was the next person who submitted his profile so let's start the time more right now and let's get going give me a second to find the profile i appreciate every single one of you guys who is in the life right now i don't want you guys to be worrying that you are going to be missing this opportunity i plan on making a lot more of these lives in the future so all you have to do is subscribe to my youtube channel and be notified when i join my next life let's turn the camera once again and let's get going with the next profile so live creator 11 at harvard these have been one of the most consistent people i have seen on instagram and it would be a pleasure to review your profile so starting out with your handle i believe that it's fine it's not specific it doesn't have a lot of keywords but it's short and simple which i quite like i can remember it really easily let's check your stories let's see what you have here so you have four stories in the last 24 hours which is great i recommend you doing three to five stories a day the first story is something which is probably a promotional story the second one is a post you will need to read every day so make sure you save it this is serving someone else's content which is great so this is another promotional story and this is another story in which you're sharing someone else's content so in terms of your story strategy you need to be thinking the same way as you are your posts on your profile it's super important to give a reason for your audience to come back to your stories meaning if someone is visiting your stories daily if someone is trying to extract the value from your stories you need to be delivering that value and in that case i would be doing some tips tricks something which would be beneficial and would ask add extra value to your content in your feed so i wouldn't only share my feed post in my stories and be done for i would share it i would do a poll i would interact further in my stories i would add a bonus tip i would try to give a reason for my audience to visit my stories so this is definitely something which i see you not doing as well let's move on to the most important elements in your profile which is the headline and the bio in this case the headline 11 on armand you can use your names because you haven't used them in your handle mindset coaches mindset is a keyword coach is a keyword now in this case because you're uh you guys are a team of two people you have to use the plural version of coach chess which isn't as highly searchable as coach for example so i am really split on if you guys should be using this poor version coaches or if you should keep it mindset coach or mindset coaching something of that lines because right now you are hurting your keyword strengths and i see that you guys haven't used spaces here which is probably because you don't have space for your headline so i would search for alternatives to this world right here coaches you might do coaching which is still stronger than coaches you might do only coach because yes you are you guys are two people but you help in as a team so i would definitely play around with this now with your bio let's start from the bottom again sign up for free newsletter to follow us in a free investment for you okay so the the call to action which you have in truckline sign up for a free newsletter okay out up further specific see what kind of newsletter you're going to be bringing me what kind of value you're going to be bringing me in order to give further incentive for people to join other than that the next thing that i have in terms of your profile is that you have two code to actions so right here you say sign up right here you're leading to follow you so again something which i mentioned to alec you need to keep your call to actions to the minimum the other thing that i'm not seeing is that you have a link tree now this is good if you have a lot of things and you have a lot of website traffic but in your case when i presume that signing up to your free newsletter is a priority i would keep this link heading straight to the sign up for your newsletter page form but i wouldn't add it in the link tree because right now you need from the users to make two clicks instead of one they need to click your profile they need to click your link they need to click on the link three link and then they need to sign up their information whilst if you if this link gets people straight to a form then it's only one click so they click they sign up it's done so this way you are adding friction which will reduce your conversion rate so i would definitely play around with this link probably do uh different campaigns so one month i would focus on getting people to my to my uh newsletter the next month i would focus to bring them to the podcast so do different campaigns for one two or weeks or a month which in which you focus to one specific link this is my advice for people who don't get a lot of website traffic now moving onwards to the highlights this is a great way to position your highlights you have a highlight about you you have testimonials you have some freebies right here i quite like what you have done so overall a really strong profile a lot of consistency right here curious for all the work that you have done i hope that this has been helpful and i hope that the people in the chat right now are also getting value from this as mentioned i will review as many profiles as paul and i have going to be reviewing profiles based on the order they were submitted so you don't have to spam i will get to you eventually thank you so much for the patience the next profile which was submitted was that of fit with reshap by the way sorry if i'm buttering your names i get this then quite a bit to me specifically but i'm doing my best so fit with reshap was the next profile i found him let's dive straight into it so let's start with the handle fitbit reshop this is a strong handle it has a keyword it has your name great your headline i wouldn't use your name again because you already mentioned it in your handle so i would scratch that and i would use your headline which currently is reshaping to enter more keywords so in this case i would enter keywords which are related to your industry so fitness probably nutrition exercise etc so this is for the headline in terms of the profile picture i believe that you can crop it a little bit better zoom in just a tiny bit and make sure you are in the center that way i believe that the profile picture will will be way stronger now in terms of the category of your profile which is currently health and wellness website yes category of accounts is great when you can find the right one but i don't believe that you are a website because this refers to blocks uh you are a personal brand so i would probably change it to culture coaching coach public figure something similar moving onwards with the rest of the bio the first line software developer this is something which is regarding you as a person so i wouldn't really focus on that i would focus more on how you can help people so this i can help you with holistic weight loss how to lifestyle so this is probably going to be the first thing that i would say in my bio and then i would probably remove both of these software developer nutrition-based fitness and probably either use one of them in the call to action the first one the first line you can remove us all together i presume that you have included it in your about me so you can focus straight on nutrition based fitness so you can have a call to action such as game me for nutrition based fitness tips or gm me or follow me for nutrition-based fitness tips so i would use this second line as a call to action and place it in the fourth spot now in terms of the content this is not the thing that i want to focus the most on right now i believe that there are a lot of styles that you're trying to bring in your feed you're using videos you're using single images but i don't think that you you have a visual consistency meaning if someone sees your post individually let's say this post there is no way for them to know that this post was made by you the same thing is about this post no way for me to know that this was made for by you and what is even worse is that throughout time this inconsistency will make your audience confused whilst in comparison if you take a look at my posts every single post has something in common covers imagery that i utilize the even the darkness and the elements that i use are in common so when someone sees my pose even without seeing my name they can guess that this has been made by me so you need to create a similar visual identity for yourself in order for your audience to recognize you more easily in their home feed and engage with you so i believe that this was plenty of feedback i hope that this has been helpful for you let's move onwards with the next profile by the way can you guys hear me fine please leave your thoughts in the chat right now so i can make sure that the stream is going fine and you guys can get as much value as possible i'm really glad that this was helpful our man stoked to hear it hello yos great to meet you again okay let's move on to the next person so the next person was abhishek what activator let's check his profile about activator oh oops don't mind me i just can't spell okay sales are you coach world activator okay so i presume that this is have i skipped someone no yours got him yours next i will cover it now this is one of the typical pages that i see quite a lot on instagram usually there are team pages such as let's say business mentor or e-commerce mentor there's nothing wrong with these kinds of pages especially when then like you you have branded your posts which is fine but you have to keep in mind that this kind of positioning which isn't really personal will have certain limitations so i'm not sure if you're part of any engagement groups or if you're part of any engagement pods or you are utilizing for one forward methodologies for growth a lot of these pages a lot of these team pages are utilizing something similar to growth you have to be super mindful of these things because although you can get forwards these four words often times aren't as engaged aren't part of a community and there is no separation between you and someone else who is posting the same kind of content so i would definitely be super careful with this kind of team pages having said that you are one of the people who are doing this correctly so i believe that there is potential dorothy i haven't missed your page yours is after galcon now let's move on directly to the review the first line sales id code these are both really strong keywords that's fine i believe that you have a lot more characters left so i i would use more keywords in your headline now in terms of your bio i like that you are utilizing emojis right here but i don't think that these hard emojis are the best ones for your page after all your style from what i can see is entrepreneurial uh you are using darker color schemes so i would probably change the emoji that i'm using right here in order to match my visual aesthetic a little bit more in terms of your first line in bio helping you unlock your full potential that's super cliche the first thing and the second thing this isn't really specific enough in the headline you're saying that you are a sales and ig coach and then in your first line you're saying that you have people involved their full potential so the flow is broken how you are not specific enough in the first line and because i am primed to think that this is a sales and ig coach page and when i see this first line it's more of a motivational slash business page so i would definitely focus on the first making the first line a little bit more specific again focused on you the your forwards your audience but that bit more specific to the headline and what you're trying to achieve with your content the second line i teach what schools don't again this is a cliche i would be super careful with that the third and fourth time these are both call to action lines and we already have discussed this but utilizing two call to actions is a big mistake so you need to be super super careful about that i like that you're utilizing emojis or gme brain for mine's attacks having said that again two call to actions will reduce the effectiveness of both what i would probably do is make sure that the third line which is currently jammed me for a gme brain for my set hacks this would be the only line that this left and i would change mindset tax to something which plays off sales and tai chi coaching so in this case i would leave only one to call to action the third one and i would make sure that it matches the headline which in your case is sales and ig the headline the highlights are quite light again the aesthetics your brand you have branded everything that's fine you just need to be super careful about this the future of your page because as mentioned it doesn't have a as much strength as a personal brand for example i hope that this has been helpful let's straight move on to the next one because i want to cover as many people as possible and get give as much value as possible thank you so much for everyone who is sticking with me okay the next page is jujutsu guiding again i'm probably buttering all the names sorry about that okay let's check it out yep this is the page okay now the first the i i can't really comment on the handle because i'm not really into these uh type and this type of content so i'm not sure if this is or keyword intensive having said that i quite like the the headline you have keywords which are relevant to your industry and then you play off uh of this in the bio as well having said that the first line which is awesome content is probably one of the most worthless things that you can put out there content is subjective so in your case someone might think that your content is awesome someone else might think that is it is garbage so there is no uh no no reason for you to use this as your first line i will dive straight into what my page is about so in your case it's curious memes predictions having said that i would probably make sure that this is relevant to my audience so if it's a random fact about when usa has been created it's pointless if it is some kind of theory about aliens living in a different planet it's pointless as well so you guys need to make sure that you are giving specific uh specific c in your bio so in your case i would probably make the first line something about what you're covering in your content so the anime i presume or the manga that you're covering that would be my first line and then the second line can be facts theories means predictions and the third line can be follow my page for awesome jiu jitsu guys and content so the third line can be a call to action in terms of the highlights i will develop some highlight covers it's very easy to make in canva so you can definitely play around with that in terms of your content you're using idtv you're using carousels you are utilizing some single images the first thing that i see though is that your text on your images is really hard to read so if you take if you took a look at the review that we made previously on wealth activator he made sure to put some grinding gradients behind his stacks that way it was way easier to read but right now your single images are really really hard to read your carousels are better but you need to work on using your images the memes i know that for my your kind of pages the memes work great so i would probably utilize them a little bit more and i would develop a strategy because i as you can see you're trying to create um a consistent feed so you're posting a car so you're posting a meme and then you're posting a single image cover so meme single match cards meme single image so i would definitely keep this consistency in your feed so i hope that this has been helpful to you to guide them thank you so much for tuning in i am following the list in in the chat so the first people who have submitted their handles in the chat when the live stream began i'm following that list so after we covered jiu jitsu kaiden now it is time for dorota with job then success psyche then we have traveling flag the mukus kumar so i'm following that list i have i i think that we have time for five more audits so i will be reviewing these five pages i just received a question in the chat by uh debrie and if you start today with zero followers then which things you focus to grow your page in the beginning the most important thing is engagement so you need to engage with other people other pages other community members and in order to do that i actually made a real so you can go check it out in my instagram page let's dive straight into the next review okay give me a second and we'll chin it in okay this is the next page now in terms of the profile picture i avoid using text in profile pictures because in small sizes for example if you comment on if you comment on your post if or if you try to look at your profile picture when it is in small sizes text doesn't work really well so i would change my profile picture to focus on it on the icon that you have and you can use the full logo on let's say your website so make the profile picture only your icon so it's legible in small sizes the in terms of the handle quite like it in terms of the headline now here is where i i don't see consistencies so for me as someone okay i teach you how to land a job on a yacht okay so this is your niche yet in your headline there is nothing peculiar saying that you're going to be offering each services so service services for reacts so i'm not sure if you understand this completely but you need to make sure that your headline one of the most searchable elements your bio isn't searchable on instagram your headline is so you need to make sure your headline describes your services and in your case i would definitely focus on the yacht part because there is no point in someone who is trying to land let's say an it job visit your profile learn some tips about cvs but it's not about your industry specifically so make the headline specific the highlights i think that you cannot further highlights for example you can add testimonials you cannot your services but there is definitely more room for improvement in the highlights the call to action i like quite a bit the second line of your bio here you can talk about more more about the benefits of finding a job on on the act i believe that this can strengthen your profile quite a bit because you add some kind of tangible resources that people can look up to so the second uh the second line i would focus on that the third line the call to action quite like so all i know the bio is okay the headline is the problem and highlights now in terms of the content i quite like that you're utilizing carousels great job i like that your visual identity is consistent so if you guys can notice she's using the same gradients she's using the same typography she is utilizing her branded elements in that regards great job i believe that what is necessary is for you to hone down on your visual identity so practice it a little bit more understand which posts perform better and why they perform better right now i see that you're experimenting with different types of content but i definitely think that you need to understand exactly why your certain types of posts work better especially these videos because i presume that there are the least well-performed performing ones and i'm not sure you definitely don't use the right ratios for videos you need to use one to one ratio right now this is more horizontal than it is vertical so you need to use one to one ratios when uploading this in order for it not to be cut out but you need to play around with your visual identity and with the type of content that people like so for example this this right here has 18 likes so people definitely enjoy these kinds of posts i pref uh i think that people will enjoy posts of some of the vocations that you have visited but not edited like these yeah he travels barcelona so i would just put an image of barcelona and add clarity and branding inside of the captions but make sure that the the post itself itself looks natural because it would perform way better and it would rank on hashtags way better right now i presume i presume that if we go into the soul travel or hashtag you will see that these posts are all of people who are taking a screenshot haven't edited it if they've just taken the picture and uploaded opposite without anything and that's why they're wrong here whilst in your case because you have so much editing people will skip it they might think that this isn't a lot so i would be super careful with the branding branding isn't only your visual identity it's also your tone of voice so if you leave the branding inside of your captions and make sure that this is one beautiful picture of barcelona i pre i definitely think that it would perform quite better so this has been my feedback for you daughter thank you so much for leaving your account in and giving me the opportunity to review it i hope that it has been helpful please leave your thoughts in the chat if there was any questions that you have okay the next profile is success psyche i don't believe i have skipped yours because i at least i don't see it okay the next one is success psyche let's check it out by the way as mentioned i will be doing a lot more of these reviews in the future so make sure you subscribe to my youtube channel so you don't miss out okay success psyche i will try to find alternatives i might prepare these profiles in advance for our future live streams because i i don't enjoy that i'm wasting so much of your guys time right now just searching for these profiles so i definitely think that i will search for alternatives in the future okay this is the profile right here and because i know that a lot of you guys have joined later on we have time for three more reviews i will review success psyche right now and i want you guys to leave in the chat a one sentence or two sentences why you guys want me to review your profile and what it would do to help you in your business or in your social media presence and i will choose the next two reviews based on that so take your time write one or two sentences reasons why i need to review your profile and i will take a look at the next two profiles which capture my attention the most is this okay do you guys think that this is a good idea leave your thoughts in the chat right now whilst i'm reviewing this profile okay that's great aishwarya thank you so much for your feedback sorry for buttering your name let's dive straight into this review in terms of the handle it's on the uh longer length you have also used the symbol i'd be super careful with this because it's hard to spell these things having said that you have really strong keywords you have success and you have psyche so in this case i definitely think that your handle is okay because of the keyword strengths but i would be careful with symbols now in terms of the profile picture even from this distance you guys can see that the text right here isn't legible though so i would probably only keep the light bulb icon that you have the same feedback that i gave to dorotha a second ago in terms of your headline it is repeating your handle so it's pointless change your headline to something which describes your page and is searchable so use once again your your keywords and as i'm starting to see people drop their descriptions one two sentences thank you so much broncourt thank you so much manuel you guys are doing great so headline make sure it has some keyword intensity now in terms of the bio you definitely haven't used all the space that you have in your bio so i would take the tips that they gave to the other people right now so first time make it about the user make it grabbing second line give some benefit third line call to action and improve my bio so i would start from scratch right now i don't think that your bio is utilizing the full strength that it has and you don't have any call to actions so the least you can do is say to people for my profile for more coaching or mentoring or real life education now in terms of the visual identity again this isn't well branded you have put your logo right here you have put your logo right here but this isn't branding you need to be consistent in the typography you use the course you use even the the elements that you utilize the style that you implement these elements so let's say this is the style that you're going to be utilizing i would just change the text change the person probably change the the core to my secondary color and make these types of posts consistent with this layout with the logo in the top left with this editing right here with this quote right here so i would try to find consistent templates for my profile oh i know this is my feedback i want to take a look at your guy's submissions right now the reasons that you guys want to improve and see how who is going to be the next profile meanwhile let me guys know have you gotten reviews yet i just got mine a couple of days ago i submitted my first video on instagram today and i would love to hear your feedback how have we been for you have they been helpful whilst i'm reading through these submissions right now okay i found one really interesting case by miroslava castro ponce amigos del mar she has a lot of followers but she's struggling to monetize them so this is something which i believe can be super super helpful for you guys so the brian yeah you should definitely choose branding course for your page let's move on to the profile that uh amigos del mar say has submitted and i want you guys to continue leaving your messages so i don't miss them amigos okay here is the page right here she has 25 000 followers which again is a lot unfortunately it isn't in english so i cannot really give you feedback on the bio but i can definitely help you with the monetization aspects so as you guys can see she is consistent in posting she also has a lot of followers meaning that the problem isn't engagement she's getting really well uh she's her engagements are really well in terms of likes at least i presume that her wheels are also performing quite well let's check them out yeah 21 000 views 23 000 views so you definitely are getting a lot a lot of traffic to your page but as you mentioned you're struggling with the monetization and this is really common with pages who don't produce their content this is what i gave as feedback to world activator when you are basically curating content or when you're trying to utilize some kind of team pages then building a sustainable audience and building a community is way harder because if i consume your content from your page specifically nurse lava or if i consume your the same kind of content from someone else's page doesn't matter to me whilst because i'm building a personal brand you guys are here for my page reviews you guys are here to get value from me specifically and that enables me to charge a premium so in your case because you're a team page you need to be aware that monetization comes harder having said that it's not impossible and there are a few things that you can definitely think i'll do so the first thing is the first monetization pillar is selling posts and doing brand partnerships so i'm sure that there are companies in your industry which would like to get 2 000 likes on their posts so if you can find these companies which have some products to sell so find companies which have products to sell and offer them stories and posts so paid partnerships this is definitely one thing that you can offer the second thing that you can offer is shout outs so find pages again in your industry and offer them shout outs of course for some kind of charging this is the second pillar that you can utilize the third purse is something called clickbank so it's affiliate marketing so you can find affiliate programs of companies in your space and then you can basically create a clickbank account it is super easy and promote these products inside of your page naturally so once someone from your page clicks your link and buys a certain product you will get the percentage of the revenue so utilizing clickbank is definitely something quite powerful now in terms of the other monetization keywords except brand partnership shoutouts outs and affiliate programs you can also develop your own products but that's something which is way more advanced so i don't recommend you doing it in the beginning including hashtags in your bio no you don't need to do that it looks spammy instagram is smart enough to scan your bio so you don't have to input hashtags in order for it to be seen by instagram so this is my review for you and i hope that it has been helpful for monetization you need to first be mindful that because this is more of a team page monetization comes harder it's not impossible and there are a bunch of keywords that you can utilize in your monetization such as shout outs brand partnerships developing your own products affiliate marketing i definitely recommend you taking a look at all of these keywords choosing a few and focusing on them that will diversify your monetization strategy allowing you to not only need one type of keyword to make money but make money from a variety of peers so i hope that this feedback has been helpful i will continue to take a look for another feedback which would be the last for today's live again if you haven't subscribed to my youtube channel make sure you do because i will be doing way more live streams such as this one in terms of the marketing campaigns that you can do i definitely recommend you investing money in instagram stories because they are the cheapest and one of the most effective mediums okay okay i found my next page which is from kumar his page is confidence with boji i quite like this hando thank you for your submissions everyone if you weren't chosen don't uh worry how make sure to make a lot of these lives in the future because you guys obviously enjoy them so confidence with body okay confidence with pogen this is the handle this the head the the headline is mind style architect architect is a different keyword i would be uh careful with that but overall i quite like it what i would probably do is to use the branding that you have right here so confidence with body i would use the body part and use it in your headline that's for sure the second thing which i can notice is that you don't have any stories in the last 24 hours which puts you at a disadvantage to everyone else who has stories in the 24 hours who has that wrinkle around their profile picture who are going to be standing out more so i would definitely plan as you have planned your feet and you have created a nice layout i would definitely plan a strategy for my stories as well now in terms of your bio let's jump straight into it the first line boosts your inner confidence okay if i definitely lacking the confidence i would want to learn more which is the the goal of the first line the second line level up your style grooming and relationship game okay these are connected so you can definitely say all three of these level up your style grooming your style game your grooming game your relationship game okay that passed out what i would probably do is because game is the main keyword right here i would probably change the emoji which you have right here to something gaming related i presume that a lot of your i presume that let's say 90 of your audience is male so gaming is a big thing for them you can get uh get away with utilizing a gaming emoji now the third line is something which i don't think you need right now you have a really strong beginning with the first two lines boost your inner confidence level up your style grooming and the relationship game so i definitely don't think you need the third line would you shape your personality inside out i'll probably remove it and jump straight into the call to action which is check out indus valley products i presume that this isn't your company and this is some kind of affiliate deal on my right probably okay so in this case i would definitely be careful you haven't built authority for indus value you have built authority for yourself for the body for sushant so i would be careful who i promote i would probably say check out some quality main products let's say or some quality grooming products or some quality style products but i wouldn't mention in this value because from what i can understand this far this isn't something which is related to you this is probably some kind of affiliate use of course of course you can correct me if wrong but at least from now i would be careful with the link that i am utilizing in terms of your highlights you are a mind and style architect you are helping people level their style grooming and relationship game insta growth isn't one of these things so i would definitely remove this highlight yes it's okay to do milestones it is okay to give back to the community but this is pointless for what you're trying to accomplish i would probably do something which is let's say style grooming relationship tips so this is something which you can do let's say you can do um you can combine them and say style chips and this can be something which you upload to your stories let's say every single day a small tip in your stories and then you can put them as a highlight this will definitely bring more value to your audience rather than what you currently have as instagram another highlight that i would utilize and you don't have is about me highlight so currently no way in hell that i can lea